Monday, 9 March 2009

Monthly Writing Challenge Responce 1

I can barely make out the old oak through the rain. An hour ago the air was heavy with hail and in a few minutes the sun may be shining, it's been that way all day since I started looking out at the old oak. It grows beside the tall boundary fence that stops the dogs getting into the vegetable garden, I remember the summer we built that fence, with the sun against out backs and freshly made lemonade in tall glasses when we took our breaks beneath that oak tree. It was a happier time. The room behind me is dark, so much time has passed since I first sat to look out the window. Now it's time I moved again, the rain is letting up and it will not seem so strange that I would go out in the brief sun break. I doubt they will even notice the rope in my hand.

8 comments:

  1. Beautiful, AN. Sad and beautiful. You are such a great writer. I'm sure I've said it before and I don't mind repeating it. :)

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  2. Thanks.

    You should see what happens when I try to make the short bit longer, why do think I've only ever shown you paragraphs?

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  3. I really liked this one AN. A lot actually. I have to agree with Race that is was both sad and beautiful. Excellent writing girl, keep it up!

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  4. Hi,

    I stumbled across your blog while searching for somebody else on twitter a few weeks ago... I've been reading your blog ever since. I'd just like to say I really like your view on the world - keep up the fab work!
    All the best,

    Don

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  5. Hey AN!

    Just added you to my 'follow' list and will be, well, following along! ;)

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  6. Thanks for the encouragement guys. I've just started working on the expansion of this since I original wanted it to be longer. Might post it later.

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  7. I have posted my reponse on Creare.

    EEK!

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  8. Some new post in my blog. I would like to invite you to comment in my new post. I hopeyou can do it. Hehe.. Nice blog and lets improve our writing.
    From me...

    brohandzalah

    http://khalifah-muda.blogspot.com

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